A failed summoning, Chapter 1

Hi everyone, I got bored today while the servers were down, So here is a story for you all =P Give me feedback please? let me know what i did =P and Would love someone to proofread it for me?

Alana lets out a contented sigh as she leans back against the laboratory wall. Looking like a whore she leans up against the wall, her dress pulled up enough to allow access to her cunt. She smiles to herself as she plunges her fingers in and out of her tight snatch. Her nectar already dripping all over the floor under her and on her fingers. She quickly orgasms, her tunnel tightening down around her fingers. She pulls out of herself and licks the cum off her fingers before smirking and saying “We can safely say I am in a sexually aroused state now. What else does that spell need?” She frowns looking down at the spellbook trying to find the spell. Her fingers leaving wet marks on the page where she touches.

“Aha, there it is, Now I just need two more soul shards to put in the circle” she reaches up into her robe, pulling out a couple of large soul shards. She smirks to herself as she reaches down and rubs them against her slick pussy, making sure to get her nectar on them before she throws them into a circle and starts the incantation. Slowly she starts to talk in a monotone, trying to pronounce the complex words correctly. She manages to slip up on the incantation once but doesn’t notice. She feels the massive drain on her own energy as the spell is activated. She looks on anxiously as a thick smoke pours out of the circle, creating an impenetrable fog.

Alana lets out a gasp as the smoke starts to clear, revealing a massive shivarra where a succubus was supposed to be. She blinks in astonishment and decides to go with it. “Demon hears me, I am your mistress, and you will obey me.” The shivarra tilts her head to the side with a smile on her face. She walks out of circle like it was nothing, quickly approaching the dumbstruck blood elf. A thick green arm grabs her throat and lifts her up saying in a deep gravelly voice “You are not my mistress, why should I not kill you mortal” Dellorah lets out a sigh, throwing the elf slut onto the ground causing her robe to life up exposing her luscious legs. Dellorah smirks as she reaches down to her crotch, resting her hand on a small pentagram over her slit. She mutters an incantation, the skin stretching and distorting, Soon becoming a massive equine shaped cock.

Dellorah gives her massive shaft a quick stroke, Glowing green runes inscribed along the length of her cock. She reaches down and picks up the cowering elf again; pushing her against a wall she starts to fondle the woman’s modest bust through her robe. She gives a wicked grin and with a razor sharp claw cuts a slit down the woman’s robe, going too deep in a few places, leaving a long scratch from between Alana’s cleavage down to her naval. She lets out a pained shriek, more out of fear than actual pain. She tries to push the towering shivarra away from her but failing miserably, she starts to tear up muttering to herself “No no no this can’t be happening. The spell called for a succubus, something must be wrong. The spellbook must have been wrong, something.”

Dellorah smiles down at the woman, relishing the woman’s despair. She leans down and licks her tears off of her cheek. Before roughly grabbing Alana’s’ breasts through her bra, roughly squeezing and kneading them. She takes a claw and slices the straps on the woman’s bra, letting them fall to barely conceal Alana’s modesty. Reaching down she tears the dress the rest of the way off the woman’s waist, exposing the elves glistening slit. Dellorah grabs the elf’s chin and forces her to look up. She condescendingly says “Oh look you seem to be enjoying that, Look just how wet that cunt is. I bet you love this you slut.” She pushes the woman down to her knees, her face at crotch level and says “now suck my cock you whore, I know you want it. And if you even think about biting me, just keep in mind that it would be, very, very unpleasant for you”. She grabs her cock, rubbing the tip of it against the woman’s cheek before reaching down with her other hand and prying her jaws open and shoving her fat cockhead into the woman’s mouth. The extremely large cockhead already stretching her lips around the shaft. She roughly grabs the elf’s head and forces her down farther on the cock, her flared cockhead dragging against her throat as she continues shoving more and more of her cock down the woman’s throat. She gets halfway down before pulling out completely, she says “Now I will give you a suggestion slut, you know the spell unending breath correct.” The frightened elf nods her head, trying to cower aware from the demon. Her jaw already sore from her ministrations.

The shivarra smiles as she says “Then use it, I don’t want you to pass out yet. Because you won’t be getting any air for a while bitch”. Alana gives a frightened gulf before trying to cast the spell, feeling the odd sensation of not needing to breath. The shivarra smiles in satisfaction. Grabbing her ears roughly and pulling her down onto the cock again, Forcing half of her massive 15 inch cock down the woman’s mouth. She pulls out again, leaving the tip of her cock in the woman’s throat, before continuing the battering, soon forcing inch after agonizing inch into the elf’s throat. She finally hilts herself inside of the whores throat, feeling the woman’s lips tightly wrapped around the base of her cock. She holds the elf close to her crotch, staying hilted inside of her mouth, savoring the feeling of almost her entire length being massaged by the girls gag reflex.

Alana closes her eyes, tears streaming down her cheeks as she suffers this humiliation by the hand of the demon she had summoned. But despite herself, her pussy was starting to get aroused from the abuse. She decides no and puts her hands on the demons thighs, pushing off of her. Sliding easily out. But as soon as she feels the cock exit her throat she feels the shivarra hand rein her back in and pull her head back down to the root of it. Above her she hears a sigh as the shivarra says “I’m glad you’re taking an interest in this dear, you want to feel my demonic cum coat your throat don’t you whore?” Watching Alana intently she starts to facefuck her, her massive sack slapping against the woman’s chin with each thrust. The drool seeping down her lips and covering the sack thoroughly, a wet slapping sound accompanying each thrust.

Dellorah’s breathing starts to become ragged as she continues using the woman’s throat for her own pleasure, each thrust bringing her closer and closer to her own climax. Reaching down to grab the elf’s head she starts to move the elf’s head to counter her own thrusts. She lets out an audible sigh as she Pulls the elf’s head to herself, hilting herself inside of Alana as she starts to cum, Spraying her cum deep into the elf’s stomach. Dellorah starts to pull out , leaving a steady trail of her demonic slime up the woman’s throat, Before finally stopping, leaving only her cockhead inside of the woman’s mouth as she continues spraying her cum into her mouth, Her bitter tasting cum polluting the elf’s mouth as she tries to push it out of herself. Finally the demon relents, letting the elf pull herself off of the demons shaft. A few more small spurts of her thick green cum coating the elf’s pale face.

Alana clenches her fist looking away from the demon, feeling the cum dripping down her face. She starts to cry again, overwhelmed by what just happened. She feels a hand on her shoulder, before being pushed forward onto her hands and knees again. Her ass sticking out in the air she hears a voice from behind her saying “Oh my, you must be loving yourself, Look at this wet cunt.” Dellorah shook her head in joy, not believing her luck in being summoned by such a gem. She quickly slaps the woman’s ass in front of her. Eying her prize she mutters to herself “I think I am going to stay here for a good long while.”

Also there is a picture i thought fitting, although it isn't my work =P It's simply one i found here http://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1289253
发布者 cinare7
11 年 前
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Sarasita1984 4 年 前
this is great! Good work!
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vadovas 10 年 前
Absolutely wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :smile:
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cinare7
cinare7 出版商 11 年 前
It may be awhile it just depends when I feel like it. I'm not really a writer and real life has caused me to stop producing content for awhile
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shiningarmour
shiningarmour 11 年 前
Fascinating and erotic - I enjoy your writing style and love a good demonolatry story - when is chapter 2?
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mell1629
mell1629 11 年 前
another very hot story...damn!
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Devvi
Devvi 11 年 前
I absolutely loved this. I do hope and cannot wait for more!
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rainbowdashy
rainbowdashy 11 年 前
This is very nice and interesting
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