A little song I have written

Your Final Goodbye

Last night I dreamed the saddest dream I ever dreamed,
I saw you standing there with your back towards me me slowly turning around.
You told me it is time for you to go.
You told me it is time for me to let you go. That I will be okay without you.
And then you just walked away.

I Cried
I Screamed
Please stay here with me.
But you just looked at me with a sad smile
Telling me, This is your final good bye.

Next morning I woke up, noticing my cheeks, all wet with tears.
Walking trough the apartment wish never felt so empty... without your laughter.
I really tried to sense you, but it was just like a tomb.
I broke down crying, calling out your name in vain.
Feeling the gaping hole in me, I can barely breath.

I Cried
I Screamed
Please stay here with me.
But you just looked at me with a sad smile
Telling me, This is your final good bye.

Later that day I visited your grave, touching those inscriptions on that cold stone.
Thinking back on when you drew you last breath, did you even knew I was there?
Or was the tumor to far gone?
Suddenly I felt the gentle breeze from the wind, caressing my cheek.
Maybe... I will be okay one day.
发布者 Wrenchgirl92
5 年 前
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biancagrl
biancagrl 3 年 前
Beautiful....!
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geileman55 4 年 前
nice song
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sanoj1975
sanoj1975 4 年 前
Kan jag få höra musiken till den här låten?
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 年 前
Wrenchgirl92 : lucky bunch!
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
Petrp69 : Well I don't have any pics of my two sisters here. But we are almost like mirror reflections of each other with the only difference except for some birthmarks that i am slightly shorter and have alittle motre muscle mass. :smile:
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 年 前
Wrenchgirl92 : wow can I see pics of the triplets?
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
Petrp69 : Me and my triplet sisters have set music to it. :smile: We have three different bands.
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 年 前
Did anybody added music to it for you?
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Bigbrownie1 4 年 前
Well writen.  Could have been nice to listen 
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Philcand2
Philcand2 4 年 前
well written :smile:
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
Alter_eg0 : Thanks.
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Tattedchica
Tattedchica 4 年 前
I'm really sorry for your loss sweetheart, I've been thinking of my losses to these days. Stay strong Sara, I'm sure your sister will be always at your side protecting you ❤️
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Alter_eg0
Alter_eg0 4 年 前
That's a really nice text and would like to hear it someday with music too... my deepest condolences to you for the loss of your sister, may she rest in peace.
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
iwanuschka : She will always be in my meories. Even if it hurts at times.
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iwanuschka 4 年 前
Wrenchgirl92 : thats a great idea ! keep her in mind - of course
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
iwanuschka : In memory of my little sister
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iwanuschka 4 年 前
sinnlich und nachdenklich !
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Petrp69
Petrp69 4 年 前
Sad song, did you manage to tape it with the right sound with it?
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
marym1 : Tack ^^ Jag har några flera självskrivna med. Och alla på ett eller annat sätt självupplevda. :smile:
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marym1 4 年 前
Fin text. Du har talang! :smile:
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
GeilerPeter1606 : Yeah. That even if it can be hard, you can survive the loss of a loved one. Even if you will still miss them of cource.
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GeilerPeter1606
GeilerPeter1606 4 年 前
Wow! Great work - very touching text. Sad, but it gives hope...
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Kenu34 4 年 前
Fylld av känslor och väldigt fint ..
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 年 前
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
HerrPeterHH : It is actually a song I have written
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 年 前
Wrenchgirl92 : nice poem
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Wrenchgirl92 出版商 4 年 前
HerrPeterHH : I don't understand german ^^
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HerrPeterHH
HerrPeterHH 4 年 前
traurig aber schön und ergreifend
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wine-not 4 年 前
great poem
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Bollan 4 年 前
Wrenchgirl92 :
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